Feedback

In Mondays lesson we got feedback on our rough cut from our class, who are the age of our target audience. This was really useful just to see what people thought of it and get constructive critisism also. Our rough cut wasnt how we planned it to be as we didnt have enough shots from our first filming therefore we had quite a few blanks throughout. 
The main bad points that came across were:

• Not enough use of mise en scene shown 
• Need to fill in blanks
• Re-film girls part of lipsyncing, not as good as boys
• Some scenes are too long

However we did also recieve positive feedback and got good scores from the class that we are pleased about. 

• Good use of shots
• Boys lipsyncing is good throughout
• Effective lighting
• ''best we've seen''

We planned to film on tuesday 6th, so this feedback really helped us plan filming and make us notice what needed to be improved.